It rained late on a Monday here,
And Tuesday it all changed to snow;
It started off all slushy and wet;
But hardened set with the cold...
The traffic was affected by it,
For ev'ryone drove quite so slow.....
The world in something like stillness lay----
Because of soft falling snow!
13Dec08
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I really like the last two lines. They end it very well.
Thanks.....the first line and that next to the last line seem to me most reminiscent of the original song....aren't they?
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