Its crazy how love is suppose to complete you
but when you fall out it appears to delete you
with that slow painful death
knowing you about to take your last breath
wishing you could rewind time
and love wouldn't have made you this blind
only seeing the outline of a person
and not what's plotting with in
your body is a chamber filled of secrets
waiting on a spell to be cast to break it
but shit keep your heart closed
and don't let it get to exposed
love brings life and death so which ever happens prepare for the explodes
the name blaming game
why everything went wrong why things still aint change
well yall still aint seen the real
and afraid to let go cause life brings chills
wondering how apart feels like
more of wondering where to start looks like
thought you made it to the finish waiting on the I dos
tell the picture started to color its self now its more of the fuck you nigga I hate you
thinking that one was it yeah my dream girl
the women I would give the world
well think again it was getting old like the newest trend
love died and this is were that broken heart mends
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Author:
Jay Solo (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Sad
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Comments1
Oh,...but you make me want to cry. This one hurts....if it is only a poem, you did an excellent job of communicating the pain of the broken heart...broken love; and if it is at all for real, which surely seems folk could identify with, then it is all the more touching. Wow. This is excellent.
thanks and yeah its real just been holding this in from previous love stories in my life but its all released now
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