BROKEN LOVE

SOLO

Its crazy how love is suppose to complete you

but when you fall out it appears to delete you

with that slow painful death

knowing you about to take your last breath 

wishing you could rewind time

and love wouldn't have made you this blind

only seeing the outline of a person

and not what's plotting with in

your body is a chamber filled of secrets

waiting on a spell to be cast to break it

but shit keep your heart closed

and don't let it get to exposed

love brings life and death so which ever happens prepare for the explodes

the name blaming game 

why everything went wrong why things still aint change

well yall still aint seen the real

and afraid to let go cause life brings chills

wondering how apart feels like

more of wondering where to start looks like

thought you made it to the finish waiting on the I dos

tell the picture started to color its self now its more of the fuck you nigga I hate you

thinking that one was it yeah my dream girl

the women I would give the world

well think again it was getting old like the newest trend

love died and this is were that broken heart mends 

  • Author: Jay Solo (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 13th, 2010 04:03
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 51
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Emi.
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Comments1

  • Cheeky Missy

    Oh,...but you make me want to cry. This one hurts....if it is only a poem, you did an excellent job of communicating the pain of the broken heart...broken love; and if it is at all for real, which surely seems folk could identify with, then it is all the more touching. Wow. This is excellent.

    • SOLO

      thanks and yeah its real just been holding this in from previous love stories in my life but its all released now



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