In your bright eyes, my sweet darling,
My reflection now I see
Of the dangerous flick'ring flame
That possesses you and me....
Leaping suddenly in that glance
Which passion dared to reveal,
The sparks hae kindled a fire now
That I see you also feel:
See it dancing, gaily playing,
Breathtaking, yet vaporous....
I can't seem to grasp or touch it--
Irresistible sweet love....
Welcome, warm and mesmerizing,
Casting shadows, snapping bright,
Imperceptibly alluring,
Closer draws into its light....
Soft, encircling, wafts surrounding,
Who would dare to say it Nay?
These twin flames a fire kindling
One mere look our lives have changed.
12Dec10
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Author:
Chic George (Pseudonym) (
Online) - Published: December 14th, 2010 00:08
- Comment from author about the poem: So, we put our heads together on the theme of love, specifically the twin flames burning in two lovers hearts, which meeting in that knowing glance spark an irresisible larger flame....he's got two penned and this is my first.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
A beautiful love poem. Well done! Very well done!
Aw, sweet, thank you very much....now how can I top it? Hopefully if I succeed at a second, I can do as well as this first.
a great love poem.....
Thanks very much!
An exquisite love poem, perfectly formed and sitting so pretty pinned as it is upon an otherwise empty page, now filled to overflowing .. Bravo my very dear friend Missy .. Neville 💛😎👍
Thank you! You're too kind. Thank you so very much!
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