I found myself in a dark wood
Torn between what is and what could
And there I stopped to rest
Pondering what to do next
Hanging my head down, slowly it dawned,
That I was not alone in these woods...
Life which I could not now see, scrurried
And tip-toed and crept 'round where I stood....
Light streamed down through transluscent leaves
Through down to my very soul it seems
It filled me with warmth and hope for what's ahead
No longer in this darkened wood did I dread
As the life flutt'ring and stirring about
My heart stirring and flutt'ring free of doubt,
Hope took my hand, love and truth led the way
As forth of dark woods, I now found the day!!
- Authors: Stormy Day (Pseudonym), Chic George
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- Finished: January 12th, 2011 13:55
- Limit: 4 stanzas
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is now complete, and it came out so much better than I expected. (Thanks Missy!) I ask that no one add to it, it's great as is.
- Category: Unclassified
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- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, StormyDay.
Comments2
I enjoyed trying to think along and compose with you...thanks for being so gracious about it. It was fun!
I did too! Let's do another soon.
Wonderful! You both composed it so so so well!
Heehee, thanks. Why don't you join a fusion, they're really fun.
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