Deep in my eyes
I see you look
And I smile for I know
That you can feel my love
For your eyes shine
In an instant
As we pass, through our gaze
Our feelings for each other
So come sweet love
Lie here with me
Let me in some way try
To reassure your fair heart
That you are not
Alone again
For you are here with me
And that cannot be changed
For love shall be
Ever constant
A force of such power
That no-one can break it down
For in the grasp
Of both our hands
Are gentle, kind, sweet times
Where we will hold each other
Ever more close
Ever more dear
Ever more everything
Tell me now lover, it's true?
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Author:
dbremner (
Offline) - Published: December 17th, 2010 05:28
- Category: Love
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Comments3
It is such a sweet romantic poem! The last stanza begs an answer that only the recipient can give, and the way you've painted it, I hope would indicate she would delightedly assent. I do love how you've drawn the whole scene so reassuringly, so tenderly, so very sweetly...it is very romantic. Passion seems to flirt around the edges of it and through its midst so like a twisting misty warmth that cannot be but seen and possesses. I like it very well!!! Another excellent love poem....you write such sweet ones!
Thank you so very much, you are ever kind.
really touchy man....brilliant work
Thank you also.
May I ask ... Is it true? Have you ever felt that way or do want to feel that way?
I just feel that love could be like this, but it seems like longing, to me anyway.
Conforting piece.
best
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