riverside luminance

Entangled, is the moisture in this haze;

Seven colours of magic surround this place.

Like a dream it is to me, a dream it really is.


It’s a place where time has no boundaries,

It’s a place where sounds blend into a musical,

It’s a place where joy surrounds all,


There’s a sense of quietness in these notes;

River sings to me like a symphony that floats.

Nature is good, nature is beautiful,

Away from the slumber of this dead end life,

I am on a tranquil journey into the wild.


  • Cheeky Missy

    I like the picture and it fits nicely. You've well-described the delight "nature" offers to so many of us. We lose ourselves and griefs momentarily and breathe free. This is a very nice piece and well done. I enjoyed it!

  • dbremner

    Without any doubt top marks for this. The first line is an excellent line beginning an excellent poem.

  • ironmaiden_81186

    thanks you guys for the kind comments..

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