(sonnet attempt # X)
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Been thinking 'bout you, 'tis such fun to do:
You know it makes me smile so happily
Considering the little things I see,
Endearing inexplicably, who knew
Not me, by ways so sweet, love thereby subdues;
Now twining invisible chords around me...
I tell you, darling, you are so sweet,
Just stopping to think makes me fond of you!
Too easily I screw things up I fear
That I could never have my dreams, because
I can't see what I have, and trying lose
The precious love that's proffered me so near,
And yet so far since I it lose by my fuss,
Perhaps it can't be had...can I it choose?
18Dec10
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Author:
Chic George (Pseudonym) (
Online) - Published: December 20th, 2010 00:05
- Comment from author about the poem: When I remember and see his love, how can I resist? But if instead of returning it, I try to get something, I lose all....and if it was so easy to lose him, did he love me?
- Category: Love
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Comments4
A well desrved 10 for this one.
Thank you very much.
I like it!! It's honest, you should not be hard on yourself 🙂
Thank you very much! Ah, but as for being hard on myself,....well I fear I am my biggest fan, so being hard on myself is probably rare and useful to do once in a while. Thanks again!
It may be a gift for your husband, my brother-in-law.He is lucky.
yours lovingly,
JVL
Aw, thanks! That's very sweet of you....and a very sweet thought.
love is a many splendid thing but so hard to fully understand when its hanging around, isn't it .. well n truly well penned me friend .. 💛😉👍
Thank you so very much, Sir! His reply is given above, however his manner of side-stepping the issue is painfully evident, having caused me to doubt his interest. I attempted to trust him despite that. Yet when my parents wisely forced the issue, knowing well how to handle their daughter, I yielded. He was disappointed, but I wasn't as disappointed as might have been since, as this stanza illustrates, I didn't entirely trust him. Thank you again.
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