Oh! My dream
What will it enhance?
At the darkness of rage
Will it dissipate from within?
Or will it endure fate?
At the beginning or the end of life
Will it embrace the chance,
to once again prevail,
on the dim and rare hope?
From within it awakens
Don’t let go of me
Sweet ambrosia of light
The chance will come
For you to arrive
And life as it was once dreamt
Will be embracing our hearts, once again
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Author:
Dolphine (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: MY OWN HOPES INSIDE OF ME
- Category: Special occasion
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Comments3
The postive last part especially rounds the poem of well and fits the title (or vice versa) perfectly. Excellent picture too.
I thank you for the good wishes and point of view. 🙂
Your poem is as beautiful as a sweet dream.I rated it with a 9
yours JVL
Thank you so much, you are very kind 🙂
It is a sweet hopeful dream....only if the hope is the Lord Jesus Christ am I sure it will come to pass...He is the Hope of His people, and without Him we all are hopeless. I quite enjoyed this musing of your dream of hope...you presented it so very well from title to conclusion....it is all so much a dream.....
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