The ocean trembles across the horizon
The sound that brings the secrets in waves
The axis changing the blue colors
To dangers withholding deep fears
How can we see beyond what it’s seen?
To embrace the invisible
As we cry for the wholeness
That carries the answers we seek
Immerse and dive through these waters
For there we shall see the unseen
Before we kill everything that surrounds us
Please listen to my plea.
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Dolphine (Pseudonym) (
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i think this is nice
Thank you Jay Solo 🙂 I hope this message becomes unfold and understood as I hope it to be.
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D.
Really good work. Seems that there could be a few messages contained in this piece. I think I certainly can see one. It make for an intiguing poem with a great picture to compliment it.
Nice planetary inspiration
Your title reminds me of like what the Bible says (if you don't mind my saying so?) of Moses, that "he endured as seeing Him Who is invisible..." The waters, the vision of the unseen, your plea,....is it to look ahead and see the "bigger picture" and not be lost in the little world as we personally see it?
the title,the content,the picture all supa dupa fly,this is great write hope we could trade poems
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