A setting sun
Melts to the sea
And with it is carried
All hopes and fears for that day
Did you have hope?
I know I did
I felt it when I woke
It seemed to suffocate me
Did you have fears?
Of those I'd none
What place have they with me
My heart refused their entry
As days are short
In winter time
My advice - is simple
Cling to hope, renounce your fears.
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Author:
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a message id love 2 wake up to in the morning...
Thankyou for the feedback.
I like the picture you painted in the first stanza, leading into the rest of the poem.....it is a sweet thought indeed, yet, since I must face and taste my fears, I but try ignore them, or deny them in vain hopes, until they catch up again with me. I'll consider your advice, though.
Thank you very much, I wasn't going to post this one at first.
I liked the first part too where you described how the setting sun melts to the sea... paints a clear image... great poem.
Thanks very much.
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