Some Thoughts Of You

dbremner

You are the sunrise

Of a thousand days

And you move my soul

In a thousand ways

 

I press your picture

Up against my heart

Without your loving

My day cannot start

 

If you are not here

How I long for you

You fill up my life

Please hear, this is true

 

As I end this poem

Some say words are cheap

But these ones I mean

My feelings are deep.

  • Author: dbremner (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 30th, 2010 14:26
  • Comment from author about the poem: You can Really miss someone when they are not around.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 42
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Dolphine29

    Greetings,
    Are you writing the poem imagining someone, you don't even know about, yet?
    I do that with thoughts and poems about love, because well I haven't met someone to inspire that for real.
    It's beautiful though, just like too utopic to be real, my humble opinion.
    Best

    Dolphine

    • dbremner

      Glad you liked the piece. It is written for someone who I very much like and who I am getting to know as well as possible. It hopefully has an air of romance about it as we both like that. Thank you for your comments.

    • Dolphine29

      You are a gifted poet
      Dolphine

      • dbremner

        It is VERY kind of you to say that, thank you.

      • Cheeky Missy

        Excellent piece. I like it very much. It is very sweet. And it IS for real, isn't it???

        • dbremner

          Glad you like it. Well I certainly hope it is for real!



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