Those eyes draw me in
take me to a place I've never been
plunge through a veil so thin
to be caught in that ocean I've fallen
An endless sea of azure blue
beneath a golden dawn of morning dew
shimmering upon the crest of horizon's view
over that vista ominous winds are few
Those eyes take my breath away
let me slip below the ocean spray
enveloped by caressing waves that whisper-say
"From your heart I'll never stray."
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Author:
Stormy Day (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Love
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Comments3
Sweet, very sweet, delightfully romantic. I very much enjoyed this poetic look at those loving eyes. Excellent!
Thank you, it so fills my heart with joy.
Wow... Wow... I love this poem! I really like the way you built it... the structure. ♥
Thank you all so much, I really enjoyed writing this one.
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