Shades Of Red

dbremner

Here in my mind

I see the world

Coloured in shades of red

The colour that paints my love

 

I see the sky

Crimson and clear

With brightly burning sun

That warms the air around us

 

The sea is pink

A pool of love

Bottomless in its depth

Made for lovers to drown in

 

Ruby mountains

Valleys of jewels

Yet none will ever hold

The value of your love

 

The trees are red

Yet still they grow

Just like a fertile heart

They reach as high as they can

 

This is my dream

My scene for us

For red is the colour

Of passion and desire

 

And that - with love

Is how I feel

About you - only one

Please feel the colours I see.

  • Author: dbremner (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 7th, 2011 01:18
  • Comment from author about the poem: Scenery for lovers, part 3.
  • Category: Love
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  • jerrypat

    A lot of expressive stanza's here.

    Love equated with the environment is a new twist, and I congratulate you for it.

    I'm happy you don't like "ratings." I've always maintained that when we write our comments IS the rating.

    • dbremner

      Thanks for letting me know what you thought.

      • jerrypat

        I made a mistake about you not liking the rating, don't know how I did that.

        You are welcomed for the rest.



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