Here in my mind
I see the world
Coloured in shades of red
The colour that paints my love
I see the sky
Crimson and clear
With brightly burning sun
That warms the air around us
The sea is pink
A pool of love
Bottomless in its depth
Made for lovers to drown in
Ruby mountains
Valleys of jewels
Yet none will ever hold
The value of your love
The trees are red
Yet still they grow
Just like a fertile heart
They reach as high as they can
This is my dream
My scene for us
For red is the colour
Of passion and desire
And that - with love
Is how I feel
About you - only one
Please feel the colours I see.
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Author:
dbremner (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Scenery for lovers, part 3.
- Category: Love
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Comments1
A lot of expressive stanza's here.
Love equated with the environment is a new twist, and I congratulate you for it.
I'm happy you don't like "ratings." I've always maintained that when we write our comments IS the rating.
Thanks for letting me know what you thought.
I made a mistake about you not liking the rating, don't know how I did that.
You are welcomed for the rest.
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