These thoughts swirl around in my muddled mind:
I wonder if you are thinking of me
As I am of you, in such ways that bind
My heart and yours-kept under lock and key.
There is so much good I see within you
That few else can, so lost in their own fears-
Pure white intentions in all that you do;
You feel like someone I have known for years.
Amazing the way you read me so well
By an expression as my cheeks grow hot.
I think I've fallen for you, can you tell?
You're the only one I have been sure of
Because you are everything I am not
And all I wish I could be: is this love? !
For so long I never knew what I sought.
All I want is everything you are,
Went looking, but never needed to search far.
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Author:
Stormy Day (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Love
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Comments2
Beautiful. I love it. Almost makes my heart beat faster with the speaker's admissions....you've captured that feeling very nicely....and pictured it all so very well. Excellent!!!!
Thank you, I'm glad I could really paint a picture with it.
I can't help but rate it ten! It expresses the exact feeling I get when I have a crush♥~. Congrats!
Thanks for the awesome rating, and your kind words!
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