dbremner

My Mind

Psychedelic swirls

Twisting and turning my mind

Tell me who I am.

Comments3

  • jvl narasimha rao

    A wonderful haiku of introspection
    JVL

    • dbremner

      Thanks very much

    • Cheeky Missy

      Sweet, in the succinctness of a haiku how excellently you've portrayed it!!! I quite enjoyed this! Excellent!

      • dbremner

        Many thanks to you.

      • Lifewellspoken

        So who are you?

        • dbremner

          The last line is really a request to the psychedelic swirls asking them to tell me who I am. It is kind of intended to be read two ways.

          • Lifewellspoken

            i loved it.



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