My Mind

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  jvl narasimha rao January 15th, 2011 06:30

  A wonderful haiku of introspection
  JVL

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    dbremnerJanuary 18th, 2011 16:04

    Thanks very much

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  Cheeky Missy January 15th, 2011 11:58

  Sweet, in the succinctness of a haiku how excellently you've portrayed it!!! I quite enjoyed this! Excellent!

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    dbremnerJanuary 18th, 2011 16:05

    Many thanks to you.

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  Lifewellspoken January 17th, 2011 14:35

  So who are you?

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    dbremnerJanuary 17th, 2011 15:24

    The last line is really a request to the psychedelic swirls asking them to tell me who I am. It is kind of intended to be read two ways.

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    LifewellspokenJanuary 18th, 2011 01:43

    i loved it.