MAKING LOVE WITH A DAME

jvl narasimha rao

When I was sleeping soundly yesterday night

You entered my bed room through the window

And caressed my whole body with your soft hands

When I awoke I was surprised to see your

Angelic beauty and milky white

You looked like a silvery dame

I followed you leaving my wife on bed

I wanted to make love with you the whole night

But you hid yourself behind the thick of trees

When I came to the trees

You disappeared into the clouds

Leaving me alone in the dark

You came out after a while to make love with a star

And deserted me and leaving me alone afar

I came back to my bed disillusioned

And spent a sleepless night

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Cheeky Missy January 18th, 2011 14:32
Wild. I like it not. You've excellently drawn the adulterous scene. The title alone was a warning. But you did present it excellently....and adulterous as it is, I don't like it.
- jvl narasimha raoJanuary 18th, 2011 20:49
  Dear Cheeky, If you don't like it, why did you award me 10 marks?Can you gues who that dame possibly could be?then you understand I am not adulterous
  yours lovingly,
  JVL
- Cheeky MissyJanuary 18th, 2011 23:03
  I gave you a 10 because I thought you wrote it well, regardless of the topic. But, please, I cannot guess who the Dame is that would make it not adultery...will you tell me?
- jvl narasimha raoJanuary 19th, 2011 09:53
  Dear Cheeky, The moon is personified as a dame.Am I adulterous now?
  yours lovingly,
  JVL
- Cheeky MissyJanuary 19th, 2011 10:12
  No. What a novel concept. Very interesting, to say the least. Thanks for being so kind to me about it all, and for your patient explanation. Please forgive me if I have been at all offensive.
dbremner January 18th, 2011 15:52
Absolutely excellent.
jvl narasimha rao January 18th, 2011 20:51
Dear dbremner, Thanks a lot fr your comments and rating
yours JVL

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