When I was sleeping soundly yesterday night
You entered my bed room through the window
And caressed my whole body with your soft hands
When I awoke I was surprised to see your
Angelic beauty and milky white
You looked like a silvery dame
I followed you leaving my wife on bed
I wanted to make love with you the whole night
But you hid yourself behind the thick of trees
When I came to the trees
You disappeared into the clouds
Leaving me alone in the dark
You came out after a while to make love with a star
And deserted me and leaving me alone afar
I came back to my bed disillusioned
And spent a sleepless night
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Author:
JVL NARASIMHA RAO (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 18th, 2011 07:10
- Category: Fantasy
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Comments3
Wild. I like it not. You've excellently drawn the adulterous scene. The title alone was a warning. But you did present it excellently....and adulterous as it is, I don't like it.
Dear Cheeky, If you don't like it, why did you award me 10 marks?Can you gues who that dame possibly could be?then you understand I am not adulterous
yours lovingly,
JVL
I gave you a 10 because I thought you wrote it well, regardless of the topic. But, please, I cannot guess who the Dame is that would make it not adultery...will you tell me?
Dear Cheeky, The moon is personified as a dame.Am I adulterous now?
yours lovingly,
JVL
No. What a novel concept. Very interesting, to say the least. Thanks for being so kind to me about it all, and for your patient explanation. Please forgive me if I have been at all offensive.
Absolutely excellent.
Dear dbremner, Thanks a lot fr your comments and rating
yours JVL
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