Forgive me
-by MVB
Forgive me if I’m not allowed to love you
But still I dare to endeavor
In the forbidden realm where likely
With you together I’ll be never.
Forgive me if my heart’s still beating
Only for you, in every moment
It’s broken but the contemplation
Of what could be will make it potent.
Forgive me if I break the boundaries
Of what I’m told I’m not allowed
All rules I’ll stomp if I can have you
I’ll be irreverent and unbowed.
Forgive me if I sigh in silence
Each time I see your precious face
And I get lost in your presence
Don’t leave me in this dreamy place.
Forgive me if I step on promise
To not pursue a great romance
And every inch of you I would kiss
If I were given just one chance.
Forgive me if I write about it
So much it hurts and makes me blue
But if you give me those four letters
I’ll drop the world and be with you
Forgive me if I’m not allowed to love you
But still I dare to endeavor
In the forbidden realm where likely
With you together I’ll be never.
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Author:
Marius (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 23rd, 2011 18:06
- Comment from author about the poem: unrequited love
- Category: Love
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Comments4
Wow. You write well! I love this! It's excellent and so beautiful! I should think if your untouchable desired could but read this, it should surely move her. I daresay she'd forgive you for loving her, but then again, I don't know her. Enticing, bold and sweet!...I really enjoyed this.
Thank you for the kind words. I only started writing five months ago, but I feel something deep inside when I do it, and that motivates me to write more. I will share a few more poems as time goes on.
I will be checking out your page frequently, too. I noticed you write quite well, too. I like Love's Dilemma for now until I get to read more of your stuff.
Be loved
marius
Thank you very much! I like how your writing is so reminiscent of traditional poetry in its rhyming and how you expressed your sentiments so simply(?) and plainly in it.
Thanks, this was published yesterday in a collection of poetry and fiction called Winter Canons https://www.createspace.com/3537298
I am the 7th from the end of book three 🙂
Thanks for telling me....I looked it up and found you...way cool! Congratulations! You are now seriously published! La, something I aspire to....Sweet! That's great for you! Thanks again for telling me!
beautifully written
Thank you Gerry, I appreciate it.
Are you sure you've only started writing recently? It's very good diction, rhyme scheme, flow ect. Beautiful and touching with a hint of sadness.
Thank you for the kind words. I wish I thought as much about my writing. Sadness, unfortunately is the common thread in most of my poems and writings since I only write about what I feel.
Thank you for reading; it's much appreciated.
This poem was published, along with other authors, in an anthology of poetry and fiction called Winter Canons https://www.createspace.com/3537298
I am the 7th from the end of book three 🙂
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