The last time I saw you
The snow had melted
The sun was high
And the air was warm
The last time I saw you
I smiled
At your smiling face
And we laughed
The last time I saw you
I was happy
Because you were
And we were together
The last time I saw you
Was not too long ago
Though it feels like years
And I miss you already
The next time I see you
I will still miss you
For I will never be with you
As long as forever
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Author:
Emi (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 31st, 2011 18:28
- Category: Love
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Comments2
Alas...it is a bittersweet love poem, for the grief of the concluding stanza...though the speaker loves, the recipient does not reciprocate the same love, somewhat reminiscent of guy/girl friendships when only one "falls in love" and the other never does....the friendly love is there, but the other hurts for they long for so much more, but in vain. I enjoyed it, especially for the longing love you rather eloquently expressed. Excellent!
Awww thanks for all of your really nice comments! 🙂
Wow...... It's beautiful and it's sad at the same time...... It's brilliant....... 🙂
Thanks again for your nice comments!!!!! 🙂
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