"A Fortnight of Valentines"---my latest (crazy)whimsy....a collection of sappy sonnet (attempts), fraught with redundancy, and so hastily executed and crafted by imaginative fancy as to hopefully not be too repulsive to the reader. And yes, fairly UNedited, presently.
Day twelve
(sonnet attempt # XXXII)
XXXII
You're a dream come true, perfect, fallible,
So winsomely endearing and too sweet,
So tender and gentle, yet firm and replete
With all that subdues, irresistible!
To foibles half-charming, susceptible,
So right all the time, 'tis no vain conceit!
So capable of admitting defeat,
Uncertain, assured, inimitable!
Your eyes so intriguing, fascinate,
At once masterful, entreating, entwine
So inexplicably and captivate.
Your voice so unmistakable defines
Delightful character which emanates.....
What joy you call me mine, dear Valentine!
24-25Jan11
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Author:
Chic George (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Ah, I used memories, experience and a touch of imagination for this one....hahaha! If I do get a Valentine...will he prove this wrong? Come on, I don't think so. This one was challenging after the initial quatrain, and the final tercet still is not quite satisfactorily worded.
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