you should have asked
how it feels inside
to be left alone by the one you love
for you to know how much i tried
to stay the same when you're out of sight
you should have seen, how much i cried
how i acted, when we're far apart
for you to understand and inculcate in your mind
that it's not a game and that it breaks my heart
you should have felt the way i feel
when things go wrong and you're not here
for you to think and always remember
to keep in touch and stay forever
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Author:
erin wynette (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 15th, 2011 15:19
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Hi! Very nice and sad poem.
Welcome to a place where you can be yourself and write it down.
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Dolphine
thanks so much dear!!!i know am not an expert but yeah here i can be myself..here i can express myself!!!God bless!
Aw, this is very sad, especially after your sweet poems of blooming romance and love....are things well with you two? I hope so. This is well-written, aptly expressing the sore sentiments of the broken-hearted. Hope it is not for real for you.
sad to say, it is for me..but no it' a past tense so i should say, it WAS...i wrote this poem 8 or 9 years ago when i was still in college...i was sick and i was begging my bf (dunno where he is now) to stay but he went home, not in their boarding house which is just a 5-minute walk but to their house, almost 2 hours by bus...but anyway, past is past..what's important now is m ok and i have my erwin.he is far from me also coz he's working in korea and am in middle east but were fine.i can feel his love and care and thanks to ym and skype as well as fb, we are talking everyday!!!whew!!!this is my life sissy!...tnx
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