I want out!! Poem, by Lonelykaren, at My poetic side

im silently crying

deep within a hole

so cold and lonely

with no one to hold

im so sad inside

ive mest up my life

ive done so much damage

to everyone including my heart

im falling apart

i loudly bawl

tears keep coming

i feel like a broken doll

im so lonely

ive got no friends

everyone has gone

so far away

im so angry

at myself

i am mad

that i had so much doubt

im simply tired

of being depressed

of crying every night

before i go to bed

I want out, of this life,

earth,and place

I want out of these

so sad lonely days...........

Alexandre Landsley February 26th, 2011 10:54
Your feelings are well express.......such a good write!!
Cheeky Missy February 26th, 2011 23:00
You've depicted the torment very well. Sounds very miserable and discouraging. Death seems like the only escape...yet to where...the speaker is almost too depressed to care, but not quite. Good job.

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