Just as slowly as a death walk,
‘It’ came to me with open arms
I was amazed; in a shock,
For ‘It’ was drawing me by its charm
‘It’ was dressed as a dove,
With a flower in its beak.
The very show of humility and love
She possessed me, I dispossessed myself.
‘It’ halted by me with her charismatic smile,
A beauty that I had never seen
I hadn’t seen it coming; thought it was a mile
Farther; now it had come to me.
There was strange feeling inside me
Of love, evasion and alarm
But ‘It’, so lovingly caressed me
Dominated me, controlled me.
Suddenly, I showed reluctance to go with ‘It’
I struggled, but it was futile-
I recognised Death was ‘It’,
And Death had come to take me.
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- Comment from author about the poem: I have edited the previously written poem 'It'... It conveys the same meaning as the previous one but conveys it in a better fashion...!
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I love the end...it was exceptional
Thank you.
Again, very nicely expressed.....only now you remind me of the Lord's warning in Proverbs about the adulterous woman and her prey......he knows not that the dead are there, and that her guests are in the depths of hell....her house the way to death, going down to the chambers of hell....none that go unto her return again, neither take they hold of the paths of life....Anyway. just some thoughts provoked by this latest version of "It"....creepy as ever!
Whoa! You seem to have a good knowledge about the Bible and stuff. Can you please please tell me some more things about this Bible stuff. I would love to read it... Can you please send them as a message? And thank you once again for your compliments.
Wow. You've never yet read the Bible? How I would love to give you one! Give me some time....I think I might be able to find you a copy online.....give me a few days, I've just made a quick and unsuccessful search right now, but I am sure I can find one for you, so give me a day or so to get some help. Here is a start:
http://www.biblegateway.com/versions/King-James-Version-KJV-Bible/
So far as I know, the KJV is the only Bible....all the others are perversions of it.
Okay. No I haven't read the bible yet. More than half of the people of India hasn't... But I would love to read it. Thank you for your help. I will wait for your search to be successful. Take your time, I am in no hurry.
Thanks for your patience....I'm going to see whether one can get sent to you! I think I know of a place that sends out Bibles free, maybe even in your own language. Again, give me a few days....hang in there!
Sure!
La, I have taken so abominably long! Will you please forgive me? Turns out the answer was at hand.....go to www.familyradio.com....they should offer the website in both English as well as your native language, I believe. And they freely offer the Bible, as well as other materials. If you have any trouble finding the site, tell me. If you have any trouble requesting a Bible, let me know. If it works out and they send you one, .....let me know?
Okay sure!! Thank you so very much!
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