What Keeps Me Here?

phylock

Falling over myself.
Splintered over and over again
By shards of a broken heart.
My love is depleted.
But Motionless I stay.
What keeps me here?
Hatred of you is so strong...
What keeps me here??
No trust...
What keeps me here???
No love and commitment.......
What keeps me here????!
Hope?...
Maybe I still care.....
And if teeth weren't so brittle
I would still bite a bullet
But for now I bite my tongue.

  • Author: phylock (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 1st, 2011 16:09
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 52
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Emi
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Wow. Something like persistent "love" keeps you there, and displays itself, making you bite your tongue(check the spelling on yours). I like how you expressed the frustrating dilemma, concluding it so sweetly/bittersweetly. Beautiful.



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