I miss you so much
I cannot put it to words
Nor can I sketch it
To try either would be quite absurd
Though I suppose I should attempt
If I don’t I should go insane
I can’t stay bottled up like this
I cannot keep in the pain
You love me no more
Of this I am aware
Though I cannot say the same;
About you I still care
I watch you talk and smile with her
Before you share a kiss
I cannot help but wish and wish
That I instead could feel the bliss
Her beautiful pale face
And her stunning golden curls
Far outmatch the appearance
Of any other girl
But still I am sure
She does not care about you
The way I always will
Her “love” for you is quite untrue
I miss your arms around me
Strong yet gentle
Kind and welcoming
Always willing to be sentimental
I miss our late night conversations
In murmurs and undertones
Trying not to wake our parents
Carving our initials in stone
I miss your sweet voice
Always compassionate and kind
Never shouting or yelling
To hear it again... how I’ve pined!
Most of all I just miss you
Shining eyes and handsome face
Witty, smart, and bright
And your loving, wonderful embrace
But now my hopes for “us”
Have been cracked and crumpled up
And thrown in the trash can
Just as this poem has been
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Author:
Emi (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Love
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Comments3
aww...beautiful...the way you play with words ..the flow...awesome!
Thank you so much!! 🙂
Excellent and so poignantly expressed! Beautifully done! You depicted it so very well, all the little details expressing the charming love and endearing experiences....delightful! Fantastic double usage in the title, poem and conclusion of cracked and crumpled... heart and paper...dreams, lover. Lovely!
Oh man, oh man! I feel just the same! Although, my way is (again) not about love love. I`ve never felt love love, only with family and friends. And this is how I feel about a few friends that I miss dearly, and who have forgotten me 🙁
Beautiful poem; I can`t put it into words.... 😮
Awwww thanks. 🙂
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