Tears running down
Why can’t I stop to look around?
Are you happy?
Why can’t I say “love” and see you there?
Where is the shallowest place?
My heart is hidden
My soul is locked away
I can only see inside my insanity
I am about to be lost
Or am I saved by me?
How can you love what it’s left?
I’m just a pity to see
Just to be the one that you seek
I will be a disappointment
As I would just throw your heart
Far away from me
I don’t deserve to be loved
I will dwell in alone
And I should stay
Slowly fading away
Cause I don’t believe
That love can exist
In the world we are now
The shallowest place indeed
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Author:
Dolphine (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Please Care
- Category: Nature
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Comments1
Fascinating and intriguing, beginning hopefully and ending hopelessly. A wild cry and plea for...love and salvation, almost pitiful with a tinge of poignancy. Your "author's comment" is so fitting. The longing is well-expressed and rather endearing for all it is hopeless yet pleading, a tugging request to the heart, yet with lingering uncertainty.
Thank you very much Penny 🙂
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