I send you three words and I hold my breath, Hoping, waiting, thinking at my age this could be like death. A minute of eternity passes and pain fills my mind, Did I ruin our friendship of this kind? I know I mean my words I said, I feel for you, am comforted by you, and I think about you while lying awake in bed. If you dont say what i hope will it go back to reality? Or will you walk a different way then me deliberately? My head is racing, I'm so nervous i just continue pacing. My phone buzzes and i stop there, Not sure if what read I can bare. I see the message is from you, But all I read is "I love you too"
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Awww, such a sweet poem!! I definitely know the feeling... Very well done. 🙂
Aw, too sweet! Excellent! The tension built until the reader could no longer stand it, followed too delightfully by the overwhelmingly happy conclusion. Great job!!!!
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