rain walk
-by mvb
i’m walking barefoot in the rain
leaving deformed footsteps
on the wet ground
steps from the past
filled by the cloudy water
of lost friendships
a blossomed tree
offers me cover
under its corolla
filled with tears from heaven
i reject it
against my wish
but I have no more room inside me
for others’ tears, too
i am only seeking peace
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Author:
Marius (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 18th, 2011 05:46
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Comments2
Interesting!!
Fascinating metaphorical representation. Excellent! A tad intriguing, but delightfully expressed, bitterly beautiful. I like it.
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