rain walk

Marius

rain walk
-by mvb


i’m walking barefoot in the rain
leaving deformed footsteps
on the wet ground
steps from the past
filled by the cloudy water
of lost friendships

 

a blossomed tree
offers me cover
under its corolla
filled with tears from heaven

 

i reject it
against my wish
but I have no more room inside me
for others’ tears, too
i am only seeking peace

  • Author: Marius (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 18th, 2011 05:46
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 30
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  • Shyam

    Interesting!!

  • Cheeky Missy

    Fascinating metaphorical representation. Excellent! A tad intriguing, but delightfully expressed, bitterly beautiful. I like it.



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