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A Dandelion Love

a Dandelion love
and She blows it away
One last wish
just to reminisce

She is a humming bird
you can see her flying high
She passes before your eyes
And a part of you dies
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I plan on using these verses in a song I'm working on on guitar. 

Comments2

  • Emi

    I love it!! 🙂 I think it would make a very good song.

  • Cheeky Missy

    Beautiful! I'd love to see the final version, and to hear it too. Delightful metaphorical expression, I quite like it!



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