a Dandelion love
and She blows it away
One last wish
just to reminisce
She is a humming bird
you can see her flying high
She passes before your eyes
And a part of you dies
______________________________________
I plan on using these verses in a song I'm working on on guitar.
-
Author:
phylock (
Offline) - Published: March 18th, 2011 14:21
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 108
- Users favorite of this poem: Emi, Cheeky Missy
Offline)
Comments2
I love it!! 🙂 I think it would make a very good song.
Beautiful! I'd love to see the final version, and to hear it too. Delightful metaphorical expression, I quite like it!
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.