Let me be the first and last in this time and space to find all wisdom of my mothers nature as she kisses the gently visions of my past. a place of love, happiness and greatness that only a sweet heaven on Earth and let me dwell on your beauty that has everything that our world needs to live. I found you and please look me up and never remember the forgetful thoughts that is a lure of my fancy because deep inside our everything is you my everyone I ever wanted to be first and last.
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Author:
Jason Humber (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 21st, 2011 09:45
- Category: Love
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Ah, Monseigneur Jason Humble, what fascinatingly incomprehensible morsel of yours have we here? Marvelous how you take the English language and jumble the words in this delightful piece of confusing enticement, tantalizing without a clear goal. The committee decided that the rating was not high enough, so deigned not to rate this time. However your professional expertise with the camera and adorable subjects such as this delightful pooch are exceptionally displayed in the lovely image accompanying this submission. We confess we have enjoyed it, but are rather bewildered when trying to define the message, so sit in bemused contemplation. Thank you for allowing our comment.
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