I know you'll never make me cry
and you'll be always by myside
you are almost extraordinary
and the best thing that y have
Is hard to explain everything that you are
you are more than worlds, and more than fun
i just cant live with out you, cause i will not be fine
its you, with who i wanna be, my life
in who i can lean on, and who owns my heart
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Author:
Holly Miller (
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Nice job. 🙂 I love it. 🙂
Very good! This excellently depicts that age-old wonder of falling in "love"!!! Beautiful, and so delightfully expressed! Tinged with poignancy, passionate sweet longing and affection, it is so lovely! The concluding line is excellent! I really like it!
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