Know This


When you're feeling so low

Feel you can't take another blow

Everything looks so hollow

And their shit gets hard to swallow


Weary soul so fair (know this)

I will always be there

To carry any burden you bear

And cast off those without care


To fight away your fears

Challenge anyone who leers

Make you forget all those years

I wasn't there to brush away your tears

  • Author: Stormy Day (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 28th, 2012 15:38
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 31
  • User favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy.
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  • Cheeky Missy

    While the graphic slang added the effective depth of cruelty and despite dealt to the suffering, still another would have been more tasteful and gracious, if I may dare to say so. It seems to have a hint almost of romance, though it is unclassified, (I had to think of your Daryn first) and offers that sweetening breath of tender consolation, a promise to strengthen, where possible, the failing, easing the burden and lightening the load. Admittedly entering the scene belatedly yet no less fervently in love for the victim, it seems an offer the drowning might only too readily welcome and embrace. Excellent imagery and beautiful sentiments. I enjoyed it sans the touch of modern crudity. Lovely.

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