How Can I Forget You
( Free Verse )
You are everywhere -
-between the warm spaces and soft rain, and the
palpable flame that burns me up with
false hope -
- the quickened breaths and warm tears,
that recall our naked passion and
your overwhelming
tenderness.
How can I ever erase the phantom of you
when you haunt my every
dream.
Sometimes,
my dreams are kind -
You and I together, kissing wine drips
from happy lips as we lay in the lush
and fruitfulness of some
ancient vineyard -
Yet, here in my wakefulness,
my heart finds no
inner peace-
it quivers endlessly from want
of you, and the insecurity that now
overpowers it.
How can I ever forget -
when
even the air I
breathe -
taste's of
you.
- Author: Dee ( Offline)
- Published: July 1st, 2016 03:01
- Category: Sad
- Views: 52
Comments4
Great poem as always Dee, I love "between the warm spaces and the soft rain, and the palpable flame that burns me up with false hope" such beautiful imagery.
Thank you Daniel for your encouraging review my friend, happy you enjoyed.. Smiles and kind regards to you....Dee
THANK YOU DEE ~ For another beautiful poem of past love. Love always has a plus and a minus because so so often one is taken and the other left. I have not yet experienced such deep pangs of lost love but your lovely poems ~ in a sense ~ prepare me for it. The happier we are in a relationship the sadder we are when it ends. I love the second and fifth stanzas ~ so so sensuous and so so true to ones experience of true love ! Love BRIAN
Thank you so very much Brian for your kind and understanding review...More often than not my works are not personal experiences but that others may relate...although I have know love and loss
like many will have too ...I am happy you enjoyed ..Thank you again Brian...Have a great weekend my friend....Dee
wow is it hot in here or what. now that is how you write a love poem
my knees are knockin' ! ww
Thank you for reading and reviewing this work my friend..
I wondered what that knocking sound was haaaa..
You are a riot...Smiles to you...Dee
Very sweet and concise, I loved the purity and movement!
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