Who am I who am I
defined by my face,
body, talents
dark frizzy Jewish girl hair
the pallor my skin
beauty; bust
how do you see me
Know it all, show off, bully?
no commitment no determination yet,
my eyes say both
unhealthy unfit
but I cry, hoping for both
Anxious friendless hopeless helpless, depressed
who am i;
clingling to imperfection, slipping from happiness
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Author:
ae (
Offline) - Published: July 7th, 2016 20:40
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WELCOME AE ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ well penned but too full of angst. My comment would be "Be bold ~ Be brave and look the World right in the eye !" You are you unique ~ individual ~ created in the image of God. Not an Ape but an Angel. You should not be anxious ~ friendless ~ hopeless ~ helpless and depressed you should be Confident ~ Lots of Friends ~ full of Hope ~ Supported and Positive. YOU ARE YOU ~ a lovely Young Lady with the potential to be anything you want. Power of positive thinking. Thinking of you ~ praying for you ~ Yours Brian
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