CHARLIE BROWN ~ Went last week on a Field Course
And so I asked him Charles what did you see ?
He thought and said ~ O YES ~ I saw a field
Is that all I asked ? O NO ~ I saw a tree !
I SAW A FIELD ~ and it was filled with wonder
Beneath my head the scent of Meadow Grass
I hear the buzz of busy bumble bees
A swirl of starlings overhead do pass !
Sky blue the Sky ~ the Clouds are white as snow
The Sward ~ the Lake ~ all nature is in love
The Trees reach out to touch the skies above
O such a vision ~ sets my heart aglow !
It's just a field with daisies prim and white
And buttercups and dandelions so gold
Where'er I look 'tis awesome to behold
One simple field in Summer's garland bright
Never take a flower filled field for granted
The scents the sights the silences and sounds
Such beauty was by Mother Nature planted
Lay back and marvel at ~ God's own creative hand
Thanks for visiting ~ This is an extended sonnet
with 20 lines (4 X 5) in iambic pentameter ~ OK
Comments welcome ~ Also please check my FOOD FUSION
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Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 26th, 2016 18:48
- Comment from author about the poem: CHARLIE BROWN ~ on being asked if he would like to go on another Field Course replied NO ! I've been on one and seen a FIELD why would I want to see another ? Love to ALL ~ BRIAN XOX
- Category: Nature
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oh how I love me some iambic pentameter. I'm not kidding. It just flows better that way. You'll have to show me how to do fusions and I'll do it. Love your poem, nice cadence and the imagery was great!
THANKS CHRISSY _ You are such an encouragement and (as you know) a good recitable poem must have structure. Look forward to your fusion~ I promise to add a STANZA ~ Yours HUGS ~ BRIAN
I added to yours. I will think about writing one of my own fusions soon. Hugs
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