Nutritionist, diabetes or
dietician
All to be unheeded in my
sweet tooth's opinion.
For how can I abandon
That chocolate canyon?
And same goes for yummy
chocolate fudge
Or to a trifle could I bear
any grudge?
Ah treacle or caramel pudding
And apple crumble needs no
bidding
The craving wishes to devour
the dessert
Few would desert a tasty jam
tart!
Not forgetting swiss rolls and
cup cakes
and whatever other
sweetmeats the baker bakes.
From smoothies so delicious
To whipped cream mousse
All so creamy and scrumptious
Maybe not highly nutritious
Ah custards, ice-creams,
muffins and jellies
the only deterrent perhaps, the
fear of rounded bellies
Only if the dietician would
recommend instead
to cut down on leafy grassy
veggie salad
For if there was for it a polling
booth
I'd vote in favour of my sweet
tooth!
My sweet toot vouches for the toothsome desserts always
The sweet rich goodies and confections , treats for holidays
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Author:
S.zaynab.M.V.Kamoonpury (Pseudonym) (
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Comments13
That was a very sweet poem! You just about covered everything! Nice job...:)
Thanx much writebelight. Cheers. Happy hols.
You too!
A very clever fun poem, I'm hungry from reading it. Your poem definitely made me smile!
Aw thanx so much and yor feedback made me smile too. Best wishes n happy hols.
Sweet and tasty write
hii tony, alwayz great to see yor name poet. best best wishes.
Welcome
NIce poem! I love it! I have a suggestion for you. There is a poetry website called Allpoetry! cheak it out!
Warm thanx dear. Take care and fond wishes young poetess.
a sweet treat to read
I have a sweet tooth too
Your poem is as always well crafted and clever. peace ww
Thanx soo much for sweet review. Cheers.
Nice work! This one reminded me of Brian's Life Of Pie in some ways but I have a huge sweet tooth so cakes and other sweet desserts hit the soft spot for me any time! Well done xx
Wow so nice to meet another sweet toother like me. Warmest thanx for feedback. Now I'm curious abt Brian's life of pie. Take care.
Many of what you talked about reminded me of treats I had back in England. Wonderful bit of writing.
Thanx soo much for feedback. U can have them where u live now neh. Cheers.
Mmm I'm really craving something sweet now. Though, I'm always craving something sweet. Great poem, and thank you for commenting on mine. Anyways, great write.
Warm thanx dear, take care.
This is amazing!!! 😀
Have a great day!
- Gem
Warm thanx young poetess. Happy hols.
Good 'un and yes - I've eaten too many - just crave for fruit and vegetables and china tea right now.
Thanx. Yeah I do like veggies and fruit but would prefer a fruity dessert or cake if there was a choice. But care for waistline and to maintain slimness I can't have as much of those sweet meats as I'd like to.
Love this poem
Love sweets
Very well done sir
I'm a poetess not sir though, warm thanx fellow poetess rose.
Ha ha...oops!!
Love all the treats you mention but alas rounded belly does occur .
Ice cream I my fave yummy.
Good poem
Thanx soo much for feedback. Cheers.
Sweet indeed- nicely done! I'll pass on the treats but devour your poem instead 😉
Oh u r welcome to partake of my poem then. 😋
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