🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

Salute the sweet tooth?

Nutritionist, diabetes or
dietician
All to be unheeded in my
sweet tooth's opinion.

For how can I abandon
That chocolate canyon?

And same goes for yummy
chocolate fudge
Or to a trifle could I bear
any grudge?

Ah treacle or caramel pudding
And apple crumble needs no
bidding

The craving wishes to devour
the dessert
Few would desert a tasty jam
tart!

Not forgetting swiss rolls and
cup cakes
and whatever other
sweetmeats the baker bakes.

From smoothies so delicious
To whipped cream mousse
All so creamy and scrumptious
Maybe not highly nutritious

Ah custards, ice-creams,
muffins and jellies
the only deterrent perhaps, the
fear of rounded bellies

Only if the dietician would
recommend instead
to cut down on leafy grassy
veggie salad

For if there was for it a polling
booth
I'd vote in favour of my sweet
tooth!

My sweet toot vouches for the toothsome desserts always
The sweet rich goodies and confections , treats for holidays

Comments13

  • WriteBeLight

    That was a very sweet poem! You just about covered everything! Nice job...:)

  • Daniel

    A very clever fun poem, I'm hungry from reading it. Your poem definitely made me smile!

  • Tony36

    Sweet and tasty write

  • SilentLaugh

    NIce poem! I love it! I have a suggestion for you. There is a poetry website called Allpoetry! cheak it out!

  • willyweed

    a sweet treat to read
    I have a sweet tooth too
    Your poem is as always well crafted and clever. peace ww

  • SabreLi

    Nice work! This one reminded me of Brian's Life Of Pie in some ways but I have a huge sweet tooth so cakes and other sweet desserts hit the soft spot for me any time! Well done xx

    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

      Wow so nice to meet another sweet toother like me. Warmest thanx for feedback. Now I'm curious abt Brian's life of pie. Take care.

    • Simple-Man87

      Many of what you talked about reminded me of treats I had back in England. Wonderful bit of writing.

    • Izzi Lynn

      Mmm I'm really craving something sweet now. Though, I'm always craving something sweet. Great poem, and thank you for commenting on mine. Anyways, great write.

    • poetlife

      This is amazing!!! 😀
      Have a great day!

      - Gem

    • Michael Edwards

      Good 'un and yes - I've eaten too many - just crave for fruit and vegetables and china tea right now.

      • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

        Thanx. Yeah I do like veggies and fruit but would prefer a fruity dessert or cake if there was a choice. But care for waistline and to maintain slimness I can't have as much of those sweet meats as I'd like to.

      • P.H.Rose

        Love this poem
        Love sweets
        Very well done sir

      • Shakerite

        Love all the treats you mention but alas rounded belly does occur .
        Ice cream I my fave yummy.
        Good poem

      • Night Owl

        Sweet indeed- nicely done! I'll pass on the treats but devour your poem instead 😉



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