Criticism

avigail

 

We don’t like to hear them, some are very nasty.

It’s the “what and the how” of how they are bundled together, and delivered to us, sometimes very trashy.

 

Do we have the strength, compassion, humor, wittiness and detachment?

To, disconnect and un-wire the emotional explosive criticism bomb entrapment?

 

Then, select some components as feedback for improvement,

While the negative energy – pushed away with no trace of pain or involvement.

 

Add a smile and insights, learn and gain, evolve and perception- expand.

  • Author: AVIGAIL (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 9th, 2016 12:00
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments4

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    THANKS AVI ~ A gentle answer turns away wrath. This is good advice ! If I get a NEGATIVE answer to one of my poems (which happens !) I reply with a gentle answer ~ which generally defuses the criticism and restores the EQUILIBRIUM. We have a MAXIM in Science known as Le Chetalliers Principle whic sates: "If to a System in Equilibrium a Constraint is applied ~ The System moves in such a way so as to oppose the Constraint and restore Equilibrium. In essence it can be applied to anything in Life or Love ! Love & Hugs for you ~ BRIAN

    • avigail

      yes balance is always important :))))
      the challenge is to take some components as feedback to improve and the nasty negative energies throw - to be gone with the wind... hugs and love
      avigail

    • illia

      Absolutely fantastic I'm still smiling from reading and still smiling whilst txting. I'm kinda thinking the same. Don't give us stupid questions we already know that. Let us ask for own knowledge. Let us judge as ourselves nobody else. With all there whirly trixy illusion. Don't patronize he who already does that anyway. Keep your noise let me create mine. I think that's what I received. Well I did thankyou bloody marvellous. I'm inspired 😆 pip

      • avigail

        thank you Nacton12 🙂

      • Tony36

        Awesomely written and expressed

        • avigail

          thank you Tony for creative feedback 🙂

          • Tony36

            Welcome

          • Augustus

            Hard to do but worth the effort. Well done.

            • avigail

              yes Agustus... yet once you adopt the approach of "playing life and the school of awareness" you start shaping a new perspective...



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