My Utopia !!!!!

P.H.Rose

My utopia !!!

So happy I am with finding this poetic site,
Filled with talented people, on darkness shine light.
Each so original and as new as new birth brings,
Filled with all manner of the most wonderful things.
Poems of hearts, so broken and so torn,
To be replaced, when a young one is born.
One of a shopping mall, built near a family plot,
Where ghosts go shopping, in their rags and in their rot.
Another of a planet, so very far away,
some will go and visit, but many will always stay.
One of two faced jealousy, that only red can bring,
Advice to show one face, please use it then to sing.
A mothers deep felt love, for her family and her kin,
Who'll go that extra mile and bring happiness on in.
As for myself, it allows me to write down,
Everything that makes, my head spin round and round.
My poetic side is here, for all of our kind,
To express our thoughts, in our soul,
             And in our minds.......

       Thank you all.....

  • Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 20th, 2016 07:28
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just wrote this a moment ago As I was thinking how happy I was meeting you very talented People.....
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    VERY TRUE PHR ~ And thank you for another elegantly structured poem. I like the subject as well ! MPS is an excellent site and it seems "Of the making of poetry there is no end" Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN.

    • P.H.Rose

      Thank you for
      Those lovely
      Words Brian.

    • Tony36

      WOW amazingly Awesome write

      • P.H.Rose

        Thank you so
        Much tony..

        • P.H.Rose

          Thank you so
          Much tony..

          • 1 more comment

        • WriteBeLight

          Where ghosts go shopping, in their rags and in their rot - I love that!! Thanks for all of your contributions! Just wonderful writing....:)

          • P.H.Rose

            Your wonderful poem
            Inspired that line...
            I could of made this poem
            So bloody long with all
            The wonderful subject
            Matter but I had to stop
            Somewhere.....
            Thank you WBL,
            The ones you write
            Are brilliant and an
            Inspiration....

            • WriteBeLight

              You are so kind and thoughtful. Thanks again! I love your poems as well and can relate to so much that you write about...:)

            • Christina8

              Absolutely wonderful poem! I recognize some of the poems you wrote about. I just loved it because we all have our different talents. Great job!

              • P.H.Rose

                Thank you chrissy.....
                You most definitely
                Are in it..

              • SabreLi

                Thanks for this one, Norman, I love it! We are building a great community here and it's great to see our friends grow; read about their ups and downs, and share these special gems that they produce! Thanks again xx

                • P.H.Rose

                  Thank you SabreLi



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