The End

Augustus

Many lurk in the shadows of your heart.

Amongst the hills and valleys there are hollows and stars.

A watchman waits in obscurity.

Those who enter may not arrive.

For some it's a leap of faith,

For others selfish desire.

 

Augustus / Folsom, LA / December 2016

 

  • Author: Augustus (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 30th, 2016 10:54
  • Category: Spiritual
  • Views: 46
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  • WriteBeLight

    Your poem is beautiful, Augustus. Makes me think of the movie "What Dreams May Come," with Robin Williams.

    • Augustus

      I did not have that film in mind but I believe it fits. Decisions here on earth have consequences depending on your faith. Thanks for the thoughtful comment.

      • WriteBeLight

        This is true. I think of this always in how I live my life. And, your poem should be framed and put on everyone's wall. You are very welcome! Happy New Year!

        • Augustus

          Wow! Thanks.

          • WriteBeLight

            🙂

          • Tony36

            Powerful and well written, great write

            • Augustus

              Thank you Tony.

              • Tony36

                Welcome

              • Christina8

                Beautiful poem, Augustus. Very powerful words. Well written.

                • Augustus

                  I am surprised by the reception. This was different for me. I am more into rhyme and meter.

                • P.H.Rose

                  Such a good poem
                  Well done sir...

                • willyweed

                  This is a poem of a true poet!
                  a beautiful expression gracefully expressed. Bravo!!! ww

                  • Augustus

                    ww thanks, that means a lot. A different style I had not experimented with.

                  • BRIAN & ANGELA

                    Thanks for caring "A" ~ and sharing your thoughts on endings ! In life there are many "ends" exemplified in your elegant poem ! But when the Big Reaper get us ~ we have to be ready for THE END ~ AMEN ~ BRIAN Love the visual "At the end of a perfect day !"

                    • Augustus

                      You are right on dear friend. Hugs.

                    • Michael Edwards

                      I'm not so much a meter or rhyme person - I love words that play together flow and this does both - great write.

                      • Augustus

                        Thanks Michael. That is encouraging.



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