beautifulmind

Darkness

Darkness walks beside me

His hand intertwined with mine

His cold breath cascades around me

His hands are like ice against my warm one


Darkness walks beside me

His black eyes stare deep into my soul

His ears like a stethoscope listening to my heartbeat

His footsteps like a familiar smell drawing me forward


Darkness walks beside me

His long arms like ice leading me forward

His pale hands pushing me into the unknown

His voice echos like were in a cave beckoning me forward


Darkness walks beside me

He walks with me down dark alleys

He walks with me down the empty winding stairs

He walks with me his feet crunching under the freshly fallen leaves of the forest


Darkness walks beside me wherever I go

Comments7

  • notapoet

    As we all walk towards the light the darkness will always follow behind. Great write...... NAP

  • willyweed

    good form and flow in this piece.ww

  • Christina8

    Welcome to MPS! Great first poem. Nice flow to it. I would agree with notapoet to say that as we walk toward the light darkness will always follow. Can't wait to read more of your work. Happy New Year!

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME BM ~ Thanks for very elegant first poem ~ but with a dark message. Where we walk and who walks with us ~ should be a personal choice ~ BUT ~ sometimes we have no choice ! Thanks for sharing ~ thinking of you ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Best wishes for 2017 ~ B

  • Tony36

    Great write

  • Michael Edwards

    One of the best I've read on this site for some time - great use of words that work so well together - I love it.

  • fauxsabotage

    Fantastic work! 🙂



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