Darkness walks beside me
His hand intertwined with mine
His cold breath cascades around me
His hands are like ice against my warm one
Darkness walks beside me
His black eyes stare deep into my soul
His ears like a stethoscope listening to my heartbeat
His footsteps like a familiar smell drawing me forward
Darkness walks beside me
His long arms like ice leading me forward
His pale hands pushing me into the unknown
His voice echos like were in a cave beckoning me forward
Darkness walks beside me
He walks with me down dark alleys
He walks with me down the empty winding stairs
He walks with me his feet crunching under the freshly fallen leaves of the forest
Darkness walks beside me wherever I go
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Author:
beautifulmind (
Offline) - Published: December 31st, 2016 17:46
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Comments7
As we all walk towards the light the darkness will always follow behind. Great write...... NAP
good form and flow in this piece.ww
Welcome to MPS! Great first poem. Nice flow to it. I would agree with notapoet to say that as we walk toward the light darkness will always follow. Can't wait to read more of your work. Happy New Year!
WELCOME BM ~ Thanks for very elegant first poem ~ but with a dark message. Where we walk and who walks with us ~ should be a personal choice ~ BUT ~ sometimes we have no choice ! Thanks for sharing ~ thinking of you ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Best wishes for 2017 ~ B
Great write
One of the best I've read on this site for some time - great use of words that work so well together - I love it.
Fantastic work! 🙂
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