Boundless

Christina8

Walking along in a meadow

in a field where the wildflowers grow

 

Seeing all of Gods creatures

feeling the breeze blow

 

The butterflies are prancing

putting on a show

 

And back near an old tree

is a curious doe

 

My mind begins to wander

to an earlier time

 

Looking at those tall trees

That we used to climb

 

We were so much younger then 

we were in our prime

 

Young hearts as wild as stallions

young love about to bloom

 

Promising each other

the stars sun and moon

 

We went everywhere together

it was absolute bliss!

 

We knew our love was boundless

with our very first gentle kiss

 

  • Author: Christina (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 3rd, 2017 21:22
  • Comment from author about the poem: Co-wrote with willyweed every other couplet. Thanks ww!!!
  • Category: Fantasy
  • Views: 55
  • User favorite of this poem: BRIAN & ANGELA.
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Comments6

  • Augustus

    Precious. Liked it a lot.

    • Christina8

      Thanks Augustus. It was fun to co-write a poem.

    • willyweed

      yes it was fun thanks Christina for the opportunity! ww

      • Christina8

        No thank you kind sir! Christina

      • Michael Edwards

        great collaboration - the fun you had writing it comes through.

        • Christina8

          Thanks I appreciate it!

        • ron parrish aka wordman

          sweet !

          • Christina8

            Thanks wordman!

          • WriteBeLight

            That is great! Very bright!

          • BRIAN & ANGELA

            Thanks CHRIS ~ loved the whole poem and especially the poetical symbiosis between you and Willy ! Presented as Couplets but the rhyming pattern was essentally Quatrain xaxa xbab xcxc etc very clever for a collaboration poem. One can detect a different hand in the odd (1 3 5 7 9 11) and even verses (2 4 6 8 10) but none of them are really gender specific ~ except I never saw you as a STALLION (V 8). As your are the accredited author I have allocated You the six odd verses and Willy the five ~ very odd (= even) ~ verses. However there is such an ambiance it could equally be the other way round. I loved it thanks for sharing ~ Agape HUGS ~ BRIAN

            • Christina8

              Thank you so much for your wonderful comment dear Brian! It was fun to do. You analyzed it well! Glad you liked it! Many Hugs--Christina And thank you for saving as a favorite!!



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