Walking along in a meadow
in a field where the wildflowers grow
Seeing all of Gods creatures
feeling the breeze blow
The butterflies are prancing
putting on a show
And back near an old tree
is a curious doe
My mind begins to wander
to an earlier time
Looking at those tall trees
That we used to climb
We were so much younger then
we were in our prime
Young hearts as wild as stallions
young love about to bloom
Promising each other
the stars sun and moon
We went everywhere together
it was absolute bliss!
We knew our love was boundless
with our very first gentle kiss
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Author:
Christina (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 3rd, 2017 21:22
- Comment from author about the poem: Co-wrote with willyweed every other couplet. Thanks ww!!!
- Category: Fantasy
- Views: 55
- Users favorite of this poem: BRIAN & ANGELA
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Comments6
Precious. Liked it a lot.
Thanks Augustus. It was fun to co-write a poem.
yes it was fun thanks Christina for the opportunity! ww
No thank you kind sir! Christina
great collaboration - the fun you had writing it comes through.
Thanks I appreciate it!
sweet !
Thanks wordman!
That is great! Very bright!
Thanks WBL! I appreciate it!
Welcome!
Thanks CHRIS ~ loved the whole poem and especially the poetical symbiosis between you and Willy ! Presented as Couplets but the rhyming pattern was essentally Quatrain xaxa xbab xcxc etc very clever for a collaboration poem. One can detect a different hand in the odd (1 3 5 7 9 11) and even verses (2 4 6 8 10) but none of them are really gender specific ~ except I never saw you as a STALLION (V 8). As your are the accredited author I have allocated You the six odd verses and Willy the five ~ very odd (= even) ~ verses. However there is such an ambiance it could equally be the other way round. I loved it thanks for sharing ~ Agape HUGS ~ BRIAN
Thank you so much for your wonderful comment dear Brian! It was fun to do. You analyzed it well! Glad you liked it! Many Hugs--Christina And thank you for saving as a favorite!!
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