JANUARY ~ Month
of ice and snow and frosted
cobwebs beauiful !
JANUARY ~ Cold
dark nights ~ short days ~ all nature
blanketed in snow !
JANUARY ~ COME !
a bleak month ~ All December
fun and parties GONE !
Thanks for visiting ! HAIKU have 17 syllables in three lines
5 7 5 and must be about nature and not rhyme. Try one
for yourself in my FUSION ~ MONTH BY MONTH HAIKU !
Love and every Blessing for 2017 ~ BRIAN XOX
-
Author:
BRIANSODES (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 9th, 2017 06:39
- Comment from author about the poem: HAIKU ARE ALWAYS FUN ~ TRY ONE TODAY ~ COMMENTS WELCOME ~ LOVE TO ALL ~ BRIAN XOXOX
- Category: Nature
- Views: 65
Offline)
Comments5
I do like this - must have a go at haiku - thanks for posting them.
Thanks MICHEAL ~ HAIKU are comparatively easy because it's all about the RHYTHM (5 - 7 - 5) and not the rhyme ! Please add a MONTH (in HAIKU) to my FUSION ~ Thanks BRIAN
I'll give it a go
my contribution added
done it was for fun.
Thanks MICHEAL for a great personal contribution for APRIL ~ great Month to be born as long as it's not the FIRST. By the way yours is what we call a HAIKU-PLUS 5~7~7 There is also a TANKA which allows a footnote explanation of the HAIKU which is 5-7-5-7-7 ~ OK Thanks BRIAN
Now it's getting complicated - will try a simple poem using 5-7-5 - will post it as soon as I get time to write it.
Thanks MICHAEL ~ I have posted MAY ~ please try JUNE for a perfect 5~7~5 Thenks ~ BRIAN
Now I\'ve got the hang of it I\'ve just written a poem made of 5-7-5 - can\'t post it until the morning. Just done July - we\'ll get to December yet.
Done
Nice Haiku work Brian. enjoyable!
Thanks WILLY ~ HAIKU are always a challenge and always fun ! BRIAN
Very nice Haikus! I didn't know they couldn't rhyme, I had just finished some. Always educational to review your poems! Hugs--christina
WELL CHRIS ~ If you look at classical HAIKU they never rhyme also they must be about nature & seasons. If they are not they are called SENRYU. The extended form is a TANKA (5-7-5-7-7). The last two lines are to explain the meaning of the HAIKU or SENRYU ! There is a lot of snobbery concerning HAIKU but I am tolerant (as you know) and If an MPS Member posts a poem and calls it a HAIKU it is a HAIKU ! Pleased you liked it Hugs for you too BRIAN
Great write and very apt for this time of year
Thanks TONY ~ Yes it is still JANUARY and it is a great Month for Poetry ! BRIAN
Welcome
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.