I cannot see, the life in my future,
Nor remember things, far back in time.
Am I just, another wasted existence,
Or remember to be, a human kind.
Is it just about, filling my quota,
Of food and drink, using up all my time.
Do I leave a deed,that will be remembered,
Or just fading out, using up my lifeline .
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 17th, 2017 18:14
- Comment from author about the poem: I sometimes think have I Used my life wisely Have I really done Right and not wrong..
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Comments5
Very thoughtful questions. Your writing is time well spent, that is for sure 🙂
Thank you WBL
I have the same questions. Nicely done.
Thank you Augustus...
I agree with WBL. I think we all have these questions. Well done! Christina
Thank you chrissy..
Superbly expressed - enjoyed this poem no end.
Thank you Michael
incredibly thought provoking art! and from reading your bio and knowing that your children/grandchildren mean so much to you ~ i am confident on the question of fulfilled or failure that you are definitely the former and not the latter. a job well done!
Thank you for those beautiful
Comments... The children are
Quite literally my life.......
But I think we all question
Have we spent this wonderful
Time on our planet well.....
I will read some of your work
JTH... Thanks...ps. Love the dog..
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