fulfilled or failure...??

P.H.Rose

 

I cannot see, the life in my future,
Nor remember things, far back in time.
Am I just, another wasted existence,
Or remember to be, a human kind.
Is it just about, filling my quota,
Of food and drink, using up all my time.
Do I leave a deed,that will be remembered,
Or just fading out, using up my lifeline .

  • Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 17th, 2017 18:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: I sometimes think have I Used my life wisely Have I really done Right and not wrong..
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • WriteBeLight

    Very thoughtful questions. Your writing is time well spent, that is for sure 🙂

    • P.H.Rose

      Thank you WBL

    • Augustus

      I have the same questions. Nicely done.

      • P.H.Rose

        Thank you Augustus...

      • Christina8

        I agree with WBL. I think we all have these questions. Well done! Christina

        • P.H.Rose

          Thank you chrissy..

        • Michael Edwards

          Superbly expressed - enjoyed this poem no end.

          • P.H.Rose

            Thank you Michael

          • janetaylor

            incredibly thought provoking art! and from reading your bio and knowing that your children/grandchildren mean so much to you ~ i am confident on the question of fulfilled or failure that you are definitely the former and not the latter. a job well done!

            • P.H.Rose

              Thank you for those beautiful
              Comments... The children are
              Quite literally my life.......
              But I think we all question
              Have we spent this wonderful
              Time on our planet well.....
              I will read some of your work
              JTH... Thanks...ps. Love the dog..



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