fulfilled or failure...??

P.H.Rose

I cannot see, the life in my future,
Nor remember things, far back in time.
Am I just, another wasted existence,
Or remember to be, a human kind.
Is it just about, filling my quota,
Of food and drink, using up all my time.
Do I leave a deed,that will be remembered,
Or just fading out, using up my lifeline .

Author: P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
Published: January 17th, 2017 18:14
Comment from author about the poem: I sometimes think have I Used my life wisely Have I really done Right and not wrong..
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Comments5

WriteBeLight January 17th, 2017 19:21
Very thoughtful questions. Your writing is time well spent, that is for sure 🙂
- P.H.RoseJanuary 18th, 2017 06:53
  Thank you WBL
Augustus January 17th, 2017 20:28
I have the same questions. Nicely done.
- P.H.RoseJanuary 18th, 2017 06:54
  Thank you Augustus...
Christina8 January 17th, 2017 20:44
I agree with WBL. I think we all have these questions. Well done! Christina
- P.H.RoseJanuary 18th, 2017 06:55
  Thank you chrissy..
Michael Edwards January 18th, 2017 01:05
Superbly expressed - enjoyed this poem no end.
- P.H.RoseJanuary 18th, 2017 06:55
  Thank you Michael
janetaylor January 25th, 2017 17:04
incredibly thought provoking art! and from reading your bio and knowing that your children/grandchildren mean so much to you ~ i am confident on the question of fulfilled or failure that you are definitely the former and not the latter. a job well done!
- P.H.RoseJanuary 26th, 2017 10:16
  Thank you for those beautiful
  Comments... The children are
  Quite literally my life.......
  But I think we all question
  Have we spent this wonderful
  Time on our planet well.....
  I will read some of your work
  JTH... Thanks...ps. Love the dog..

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