i stood pensive
near the sparkling water’s edge
where nature drowns out
the madness of humanity
staring at the rising sun
i’m deluged
in ephipany
peace rests
only in the place
where i know nothing
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And another super posting - which I thoroughly enjoyed.
awww thanks Michael ~ you made my day :0)
Nowhere like nature to bring us to heel Jane - the poem so cleverly lined and formed has a last line that says it all. Thanks for this first class write with such an apt image.
thank you Fay! the poem came to me when i was at the water's edge in the photo above :0)
This is beautiful! The whole puece gives me a sense of calm. Well done!
thank you very much jarid! i really appreciate it!
being one with nature,is being one with God and all his beauty in which you captured it well in your words and the beautiful image,,,
thank you ron! i really appreciate your kind words :0)
In epiphany that means at the moment of sudden and great revelation I realize this flood and that is why I am deluged. Standing with very deep thought I have witnessed nature more. I know nothing but still I exist here. Rising sun starts the first day. Water's edge talks about madness of humanity. This is an amazing poem with thoughtful imagery.
thank you very much pintu!
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