MILE OVEN DYE
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Weem aid loval knight and weed id lye
Till moor ning ann dwerl 8 2 stur
mile oven dye.
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MY LOVE AND I
I booked into a cheap hotel, a nice surprise for her
We made love all night and we did lie
till morning and were late to stir
my love and I.
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
Offline) - Published: January 19th, 2017 00:26
- Comment from author about the poem: This one for fun. A toffee for anyone who can translate this little poem. If you can't get it I'll publish the translation later. Today's abstract I called Dimonate.
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My love and I
I book into a cheap hotel
A nice surprise for her
We made love all night
And we did lay
Till morning and where
Late to stir
My love and i
I've just woke up
Got a bit of eye
Exercise doing this.
Thanks...
Congrats PH - a toffee for that - I'll pop the translation underneath it above
THANKS MICHAEL ~ We need a bit of humour on MPS (Please check my latest poem SPAM HAIKU !) Fortunately my GRANDAD is Siamese so I got the same translation as PHR so it must be right. Do we both get a TOFFEE ~ I like creamy whirls ! Thanks BRIAM
I'll have to visit the Sweet Shop (Sorry American friends - that's the Candy Store in American ) and see if they've got any. A Siamese Grandad - well my wife is from Burma so something else in common eh what?
Ha Ha. Great idea!
You've got to smile haven't you...!
Fun to read
Fun to figure out
Fun to compose
Fun to check into a cheap hotel......
Yup - it's good fun - or so I seem to remember...! 🙂
Great write.
Thanks hippy
splendid.. I like everything about this little pearl of a poem.... nowt lost in translation neither.... Neville
Cheers Neville - must write another like this - great fun to do.
I think you should... I am very impressed
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