Life is like a flower this does blossom ever.
Visiting such a nice village I forget never.
So much of love you give I cannot compare.
I am much thankful, oh Sarsara as you care.
Air gives freshness, soil feels new breeze,
Standing in your lap, I see ever green trees.
Please you tell me fable, I am very stable,
Cable of love ties us, I see mirror on table.
Able I am by your bless to stand near you,
Oh Sarsara! Wisdom you give is pure new.
Dew of new dawn adores joy of the dusk,
Busk I hear in street, it greets giving musk.
Husk, removing from fruit you give sweet,
Eat, we eagerly, we are fortunate to meet.
Beet you offer, you offer roots and crops,
Farmers are ever happy getting rain drops.
Stops, a visitor to see, your beauty more,
Door is opened of my heart you are in core.
Store I memory, feeling lucky is sun light,
God is graceful, he makes our lives bright.
© Pintu Mahakul,11 September 2016. All rights reserved.
ସରସରା ନୂଆ କାହାଣୀ (Sarasaraa Nooaa Kaahaanee) (Sarsara The New Fable)
This poem is Odia language translation of above original poem titled, 'Sarsara The New Fable, '
ଜୀବନ ଟି ସତେ କୁସୁମ ସମାନ ପ୍ରଷ୍ଫୁଟିତ ସଦା କାଳେ,
ଭୁଲିପାରେ ନାହିଁ ସୁନ୍ଦର ଗ୍ରାମସେ ଭ୍ରମଣେ ମୁ କେତେବେଳେ. ।
କେତେ ଯେ ସେନେହ ଦିଅ ତୁମେ ସତେ ଅତୁଳନୀୟ ଆଦରେ,
କୃତଜ୍ଞ ମୁ ନିତ୍ୟ ଆହେ ସରସରା ସତ ତୁମ ଯତନରେ. ।
ପବନ ଦିଏ ଫୁରତି ମାଟି ଅନୁଭବେ ଯେ ମୃଦୁ ମଳୟ,
ଛିଡା ହୋଇ ତୁମ କୋଳେ ଦେଖେ ମୁହିଁ ସବୁଜ ତରୁ ବଳୟ. ।
ଦୟାକରି ତୁମେ କହ ଗୋ କାହାଣୀ, ସ୍ଥିତପ୍ରଜ୍ଞାନ ମୁ ଜାଣ,
ସେନେହର ରଜ୍ଜୁ ବାନ୍ଧଇ ଆମ୍ଭଙ୍କୁ ମେଜେ ଦେଖେ ଦରପଣ. ।
ତୁମରି ଆଶୀଷ ଯୋଗୁଁ ମୁ ସକ୍ଷମ ଛିଡା ହେବା ପାଇଁ ପାଶେ,
ଆହେ ସରସରା ଜ୍ଞାନ ତୁମେ ଦିଅ ପବିତ୍ର ନବ ଵିଭାଷେ. ।
ନବ ସକାଳର ଶିଶିର କୁ ଭୁରେ ସଞ୍ଜର ଆନନ୍ଦ ମନେ,
ପଥରେ ସଙ୍ଗୀତ ଅଭିନନ୍ଦନେ ଗୋ କସ୍ତୁରୀ ବାସ ମୁ ଶୁଣେ. ।
ଆଦରେ ଫଳରୁ ଓଢଣୀ କାଢି ଗୋ ଦିଅ ତୁମେ ମିଠା ଫଳ,
ସଉକେ ସେ ଫଳ ଭୁଞ୍ଜୁ ଆମ୍ଭେ ପୁଣି ସାକ୍ଷ୍ୟାତେ ସୁଭାଗ୍ୟଶୀଳ. ।
ମୂଳ ଦିଅ ତୁମ୍ଭେ ମୂଳା ଦିଅ ତୁମ୍ଭେ ସାଥେ ଯେ ଫସଲ ସିନ୍ଧୁ,
ଆନନ୍ଦିତ ଅତି କୃଷକଗଣ ଗୋ ପାଇ ବୃଷ୍ଟି ଜଳ ବିନ୍ଦୁ. ।
ଦେଖିବାକୁ ତୁମ ଅନିନ୍ଦ୍ୟ ସେ ଚାରୁ ଅଟକେ ପରିଯଟକ,
ହୃଦୟ ଦୁଆର ଖୋଲା ଅଛି ମୋର କୋରଡେ ତୁମେ ଝଟକ. ।
ସଞ୍ଚୟ କରେ ମୁ ତୁମର ସ୍ମୁରତି ସୁଭାଗେ ରବି ଆଲୋକ,
ଦୟାଶୀଳ ସେହି ଈଶ୍ବର କରନ୍ତି ଉଜ୍ବଳ ଜୀବ ଆମ୍ଭଙ୍କ. ।
© Pintu Mahakul,11 September 2016. All rights reserved. © ପିଣ୍ଟୁ ମହାକୁଳ ସତ୍ଵାଧୀକାର ଗଚ୍ଛିତ ରହିଛି.
Cover Photo © Pintu Mahakul,2016. All rights reserved.
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sarsara pronounced as Sar-Sa-raa is name of a village and meaning of Sarsara is union of soul with God. This poem is written as a tribute to villagers and village Sarsara situated in Western part of Bonai Sub-division of Sundargarh district in Odisha state of India. Cover Photo © Pintu Mahakul,2016. All rights reserved. Here the Odia language translation of this poem is included along with below original English poem.
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this is such a romantic write my friend,love the second language,and the beautiful image
Thank you very much my old and gold friend of poetic days. Your opinion values more.
Such a great poem! You are very talented in this. Well done.
Thank you very much for reading this poem again.
Feedback received from:
Sylvia Frances Chan: AH....SARSARA that FAMOUS and MOST MAGICAL POEM in ODIA on POETFREAK, I STILL REMEMBER....YES, SARSARA THAT LOVING VILLAGE....YOU CAN FEEL THE ATMOSPHERE WHILE READING THIS BEAUTIFUL POETRY.........MESMERIZING....Pintu Mahakul...THANK YOU..
September 11,2016 at 2: 42pm (through FB) (
Feedback received
Lynda Robson: A very spiritual place you have written about here, very interesting and well written 👏🏻
January 16, 2017at 1: 41am
Zelda Ann Broussard: Lovable hug and dance of love (through a sticker of such expression)
January 17,2017. at 8: 19am
Bipin Churchung Rabha : Beautiful
January 17,2017, at 5: 40pm
Lori Humphries: I van imagine this being sung with such love
January 15,2017 at 1: 40am
Melvina Germain Quite a delightful expression of surrounding love.....
January 15,2017, at 2: 44am
Mike Hauser: A wonderful piece my friend!
January 15,2017, at 4: 10am
Jane Taylor Hardy: oh Pintu Mahakul - i love it Husk, removing from fruit you give sweet,
Eat, we eagerly, we are fortunate to meet. so so pretty!
January 15,2017, at 5: 00am
Meg Gultiano Villamera : Wow! beautiful flow of words, gives me an idea to set your words into music! Very endearing to the people, as your lines says it all.This is poetry at your best! I love everything here, and the gratitude you give to our God is the sweetest i can ever imagine.Thank you for sharing, dear Pintu
January 15,2017, at 5: 54am
Anthony Davidson: So much of love you give I cannot compare. 😊 Simply beautiful!
January 15,2017, at 9: 00am
Dorothy A. Holmes: A wonderful tribute and my pleasure to read. I love the serenade of your words as they give thanks and praise to this place and God which both fill your heart...Your Sarsara a place divine.
January 15,2017 at 4: 53pm
Sylvia Frances Chan Loveliest words ever said in this Magnificent Tribute to Sarsara, your most beautiful home where your poetry is derived from. Dear Pintu Mahakul you conjured magic with your fantastic words in this gloryfying poem....unforgettable union with soul of God....Thank you so much for sharing this priceless hometown Beauty.
January 15,2017, at 11: 46pm (all through FB)
Jarid Miller: Amazing poem with a great flow to it. Love the feel that it gives me. Superb job!
January 14,2017 at 7: 35pm
Ency Bearis: Nice parable.
January 14,2017 at 7: 37pm
Wendy Ronshausen: Very nice, quite like a melody of heart [3
January 14, 2017 at 7: 52pm
Ronell Warren: Well crafted poem here Pintu. Great flow.
January 14,2017 at 7: 56pm
Rosie Villorejo: Nice poem and photo.
A Beautiful expression of thanksgiving which God endows upon us each day, His beautiful creation.
January 14,2017 at 8: 03pm
Jay Gopal Meher: Waooooo very nice dear...
January 14,2017 at 8: 28pm
Senthilnathan Viswanathan: no words
January 14,2017 at 8: 56pm
Fay Slimm (1/15/2017 4:19:00 PM)
Beautiful
Your words weave a scene which raises the spirit - the village sounds just the right place to be for a warm welcome - thank you for sharing Sarsara with us dear Pintu.
Lasoaphia Quxazs (1/15/2017 11:17:00 AM)
lovely
beautiful poem about nature and Spirit. (All through FB and PH)
pintu thank you so very kindly for sharing this mystical piece about a magical place. a wonderful enchanting write!
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