I look in the mirror and see a smile but tears always come down my face my happy days always became a waste good meals with a bitter taste I'm a victim with no case . Only a blind man could see my pain and a deaf lady could hear me complain . Losing my grandparents in 10 months was very hard after the 3rd one my life was scarred . Yeah my mouth can be very filthy it's cause im always getting judged but never guilty . People treat me like I'm seasonal just like them pretty leaves that got raked I sit and wonder am I just a mistake . Momma was never there after all the stuff I still care . Daddy always think I'm doing wrong we all listening to the same song .My life is hard as acrylic might be the same song just a different lyric. All the stuff people putting me through my heart still not cold I know just dealing with it makes me very bold this ain't new to me its real old . If I died today wonder what truth would be told surrounding by fake people might as well be in the casket with a blindfold.
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just had so much pain I was in a dark side of my life . Words helped me get through it .
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WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for a very interesting poem ! It pulsates with rhyme and rhythm and the subject pulsates with PAIN ~ Please you find it cathartic to write poetry, I have lost loved ones so I can empathise ! Love the city skyline in the Sun ~ to me it represents the challenge we face each day as we venture out into the real World ! Love your final line "If I died today ................... blindfold" i about sums up how p[eople feel when we have gone. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN ~ UK Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B
Thank you for your comment Brian means a lot . Tomorrow more to come
Great write. Writing has always helped me in dark times as well
Thanks and that's when the true poet in me comes out
Welcome
sad,sad write,you have the power to change it all,change your mind,change your life
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