if I were an Angel
And I fell to the Earth
Would you catch me
As I tumble through the sky
So I would not strike
My feet upon the stone
Or
Would you let me fall
To dash upon the jagged rocks
To break into millions of
Pieces
To bleed
To have broken wings
To fly no more
If I were an Angel
And I fell to the Earth
Would you catch me
Or
Let me fall
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Author:
Tony36 (
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Comments10
Great write tony. I'd catch you!
Thank you
Don't worry Tony. No one here would let you ever fall! 🙂 Great job!
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Welcome Tony!
Err, how much do you weigh? Seriously, this is a great poem Tony.
Thank you
I'll direct you to a trampoline so you can bounce, then invite you in for a beer. Great poem.
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loved it tony! super pretty poetry!
Thank you
So simply expressed and so exquisite - Brill.
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Hmm, let me think...
Just kidding, nice work!
Thank you
Catch !!
No doubt.
We'd all miss your written words too much
Thank you
s.zaynab.kamoonpuri
January 29th, 2017 03:31
Wow u r an angelic poet so we Wud all catch u. This was a super poem, lovely and imaginative. Cool to read. Great to read from u again, hapy new yr poet.
Thank you
lovely thoughts my friend
Thank you
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