Angel

Tony36

if I were an Angel

And I fell to the Earth 

Would you catch me 

As I tumble through the sky

So I would not strike 

My feet upon the stone 

Or

Would you let me fall 

To dash upon the jagged rocks

To break into millions of

Pieces 

To bleed

To have broken wings

To fly no more

 

If I were an Angel 

And I fell to the Earth 

Would you catch me 

Or

Let me fall

  • Author: Tony36 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 27th, 2017 08:57
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Christina8

    Great write tony. I'd catch you!

    • Tony36

      Thank you

    • WriteBeLight

      Don't worry Tony. No one here would let you ever fall! 🙂 Great job!

      • Tony36

        Thank you

        • WriteBeLight

          Welcome Tony!

        • Seeker

          Err, how much do you weigh? Seriously, this is a great poem Tony.

          • Tony36

            Thank you

          • Augustus

            I'll direct you to a trampoline so you can bounce, then invite you in for a beer. Great poem.

            • Tony36

              Thank you

            • janetaylor

              loved it tony! super pretty poetry!

              • Tony36

                Thank you

              • Michael Edwards

                So simply expressed and so exquisite - Brill.

                • Tony36

                  Thank you

                • poetboy123

                  Hmm, let me think...


                  Just kidding, nice work!

                  • Tony36

                    Thank you

                  • Shakerite

                    Catch !!
                    No doubt.
                    We'd all miss your written words too much

                    • Tony36

                      Thank you

                    • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

                      s.zaynab.kamoonpuri
                      January 29th, 2017 03:31
                      Wow u r an angelic poet so we Wud all catch u. This was a super poem, lovely and imaginative. Cool to read. Great to read from u again, hapy new yr poet.

                      • Tony36

                        Thank you

                      • ron parrish aka wordman

                        lovely thoughts my friend

                        • Tony36

                          Thank you



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