Life would
be
worthless
and
short
If this is
the only
dear life
we
have
Great
plans just
death can
abort
to be
useless
once you
met
your grave.
And for
those who
die young,
in
childhood's
tender
ages
How short
and
incomplete
life
would be
How
unfair and
unlucky if
death's
the end
for them
Besides
life to the
fullest is
eternity.
What
about
those who
born
and die
poor
or those
born deaf,
blind or
lame
What if
they were
so
doomed
without
any cure
How
unlucky if
resurrection
never
came!
But a
belief that
there's a
life
after this
could be
of great
consolation
and solace
especially
to the
poor
handicapped,
the
shortlived
that they
could
make it up
under
heaven's
grace!
For the
good one
who is
born
blind,
In heaven
shall he in
brighter
vision see
And the
goodly
one yet
who
has lost
his mind
will in the
afterlife
be as sane
as could be
The deaf
man with
his balance
of pious
acts
Only the
hereafter
would
compensate
what he
lacks
And that
godly one
born poor
and who
dies poor
could be
of the
richest at
heaven's
door
In this life
those
who've
been
saintly yet
unable to
talk
could
cheer up
to believe
what
heaven
has in
stock
For this
world can
be misery,
Heaven's
the place
to rock
In this
world at
times
you've
to let the
hawk
gawk
Knowing
your
tormentor
in
heaven
shall ye
mock
Thus for a
true
happy
ever
after
for an
abode of mirth and
laughter
Work
towards
thy
hereafter
A divine
place
devoid of
disaster!
O' God therefore after my death and demise
Do place me in a peaceful palatial paradise.
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Author:
S.zaynab.M.V.Kamoonpury (Pseudonym) (
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Comments10
Yes pal heaven will be a place where no disasters happen. I like your thoughts on this.
My warmest thanx, take care. It Wud be nice to meet there though it would be nice to meet u here too pal.
This is so well drafted and makes the message in such elegant prose. Thanks for your kind comments against my latest posting.
Thanx for your words too. Cheers n hapy new yr.
Beautiful thought. Nice work!
Thanx soo much for acknowledging it all. Happy new yr poet.
You as well! 🙂
Love it! The way it is layed out is awesome too
Warm thanx . Hapy new yr.
Very philosophical. Nicely done.
Really eh? Thanx so much. Hapy new yr.
beautifully woven words that uplift and give hope!
So glad it uplifts. Thanx so much and warmest wishes.
I believe in the hereafter, when our best lives will be lived. Your words are pleasantly encouraging. Great write!
Yes pal a much better, best life indeed. Like how u said that. Thanx for your fine thoughts. Warmest cheers.
lovely thoughts,and i`m sure it`s very true,
It is I assure u friend, true and factual. Cheers and hapy new yr.
Yes some of these events are quite unfortunate to be exact. Death is a timely heist. For beliefs if there is truly a afterlife in existence. Only that particular individual him/herself can envision that journey solely alone.
Good read poet.
We really need an afterlife. This life's too short to be it one and only. Yeah we do go alone u mean. I wonder if when a 30 or 40 people die together, do they go together to the afterlife though.
Thanx for your thoughts on this.
Thanks for this inspirational read to pursue the belief in a Hereafter. I love the free style you use here and the force of short line adds to its prayerful message to "work for thy hereafter" and ask at our earth-end to be placed in "palatial paradise" A fine poetic example of faith in the caring and loving unseen.
So glad to see u believe in the hereafter. Take care. 👌🌌💐
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