THE GREAT UNREAD
I’ve written a poem in invisible ink.
A short little poem to make you think
but the final stanza was never penned;
I ran out of ink before the end.
Well the problem came as a bit of a blow:
only two stanzas - unsee them below:
1)
2)
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Author:
Michael Edwards (
Offline) - Published: February 5th, 2017 01:23
- Comment from author about the poem: A bit of nonsense for today plus another of my watercolours - my home town.
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Comments8
Ta Kat for your gracious uncomment - much appreciated.
THANKS MICHAEL ~ Love the poem and the PICTURE ! "You say it best when you say nothing at all !" Please check my Poem ~ BRIAN
To use that awful cliché 'More is Less' thanks Brian
Very cute Michael. Your painting feels like a sunny day. Wonderful colors!
Very clever the way you thought the poem out. Your painting is superb.
Thanks rr
I went back to unsee the poem, but my eyes failed. I stick with the great intro and the amazing pic.
Much better unseen than obscene - now there's a thought !!
True!
LOL! Love it
Thanks Tony - well yerv gorra laff ent yer.
Welcome
Beautiful picture! I absolutely loved that fun poem!
Great painting. Here are my comments: 1)
2)
- Phil A.
Thanks Phil for taking the time to comment at such length - as for the third stanza I was going to write something along the following lines: ................................................................................................................................................................................................... (Full Stop)
What a line of nothing. I saw through it immediately, and the meter is nonexistent.
O.K. I'll stop now.
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