First light Choices
You stand there staring at the long line down the wall
Left is my savour, right is your fall
In this day that you walk and the path that you take
Will determine a fate from the point that you wake.
It's all about the choices we make on this day
And hope to choose right and
not a wrong one we pray.
Nothing is written in the stars up above,
It's about the road that we take
In this life that we love.
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I've just woke up and this poem Came into my head as I stared At the wall... you can find or miss Something walking left or walking right How many time have we said "If only I'd of stayed in bed"..
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Every day in every way, memories will fade, decisions to be made, the futures not set - well it isn't yet. Love it PH
Thank you Michael
Thanks FRIEND ~ as you say CARPE DIEM ~ Seize the day ~ you never know what lies ahead on "The Road Taken !" BRIAN
Ha Ha. Like your comment, but you are right. Take a hold of good opportunities and choose well. 🙂
I like your poem! I like the comments before me, like seize the day. We don't know what will happen if we don't try. Great write!
Thank you Chrissy
Brian's quote is brilliant
But I love another Latin phrase
"Quod in Vita facimus, in Aeternum resonat" means
"That we make in life, Echoes in Eternity"... I love Latin...
A wonderful quote, thanks for sharing!
Great write
Thank you Tony...
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